Five Poems I Wish I Had Written

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01Seamus Heaney's 'the Underground'20170925Don Paterson is an award-winning poet, editor and teacher, but for all his technical ability and the recognition that has been paid to his work Paterson is acutely aware of awe and sometimes envy when he looks at the work of other writers. Here he applies his wit and skills of technical analysis to discussing the five poems he wishes he had written.

Tonight, Seamus Heaney's 'The Underground' .

There we were in the vaulted tunnel running,

You in your going-away coat speeding ahead

And me, me then like a fleet god gaining

Upon you before you turned to a reed

Or some new white flower japped with crimson

As the coat flapped wild and button after button

Sprang off and fell in a trail

Between the Underground and the Albert Hall.

Honeymooning, moonlighting, late for the Proms,

Our echoes die in that corridor and now

I come as Hansel came on the moonlit stones

Retracing the path back, lifting the buttons

To end up in a draughty lamplit station

After the trains have gone, the wet track

Bared and tensed as I am, all attention

For your step following and damned if I look back.

from Station Island (Faber, 1984), copyright (c) Seamus Heaney 1984,.

Poet Don Paterson reflects on Seamus Heaney's 'The Underground'.

02Elizabeth Bishop's 'large Bad Picture'20170926Don Paterson is an award-winning poet, editor and teacher, but for all his technical ability and the recognition that has been paid to his work Paterson is acutely aware of awe and sometimes envy when he looks at the work of other writers. Here he applies his wit and skills of technical analysis to discussing the five poems he wishes he had written.

Tonight, Elizabeth Bishop's 'Large Bad Picture'.

Remembering the Strait of Belle Isle or

some northerly harbor of Labrador,

before he became a schoolteacher

a great-uncle painted a big picture.

Receding for miles on either side

into a flushed, still sky

are overhanging pale blue cliffs

hundreds of feet high,

their bases fretted by little arches,

the entrances to caves

running in along the level of a bay

masked by perfect waves.

On the middle of that quiet floor

sits a fleet of small black ships,

square-rigged, sails furled, motionless,

their spars like burnt match-sticks.

And high above them, over the tall cliffs

semi-translucent ranks,

are scribbled hundreds of fine black birds

hanging in n's in banks.

One can hear their crying, crying,

the only sound there is

except for occasional sighing

as a large aquatic animal breathes.

In the pink light

the small red sun goes rolling, rolling,

round and round and round at the same height

in perpetual sunset, comprehensive, consoling,

while the ships consider it.

Apparently they have reached their destination.

It would be hard to say what brought them there,

commerce or contemplation.

Poet Don Paterson reflects on Elizabeth Bishop's 'Large Bad Picture'.

03Michael Donaghy's 'the Hunter's Purse'20170927Don Paterson is an award-winning poet, editor and teacher, but for all his technical ability and the recognition that has been paid to his work Paterson is acutely aware of awe and sometimes envy when he looks at the work of other writers. Here he applies his wit and skills of technical analysis to discussing the five poems he wishes he had written.

Tonight, Michael Donaghy 'The Hunter's Purse'.

is the last unshattered 78

by 'Patrolman Jack O'Ryan, violin',

a Sligo fiddler in dry America.

A legend, he played Manhattan's ceilidhs,

fell asleep drunk one snowy Christmas

on a Central Park bench and froze solid.

They shipped his corpse home, like his records.

This record's record is its lunar surface.

I wouldn't risk my stylus to this gouge,

or this crater left by a flick of ash -

When Anne Quinn got hold of it back in Kilrush,

she took her fiddle to her shoulder

and cranked the new Horn of Plenty

Victrola over and over and over,

and scratched along until she had it right

or until her father shouted

We'll have no more

Of that tune

In this house tonight'.

She slipped out back and strapped the contraption

to the parcel rack and rode her bike

to a far field, by moonlight.

It skips. The penny I used for ballast slips.

O'Ryan's fiddle pops, and hiccoughs

back to this, back to this, back to this:

a napping snowman with a fiddlecase;

a flask of bootleg under his belt;

three stars; a gramophone on a pushbike;

a cigarette's glow from a far field;

over and over, three bars in common time.

Poet Don Paterson reflects on Michael Donaghy's 'The Hunter's Purse'.

04Sylvia Plath's 'cut'20170928Don Paterson is an award-winning poet, editor and teacher, but for all his technical ability and the recognition that has been paid to his work Paterson is acutely aware of awe and sometimes envy when he looks at the work of other writers. Here he applies his wit and skills of technical analysis to discussing the five poems he wishes he had written.

Tonight, Sylvia Plath's poem 'Cut'.

For Susan O'Neill Roe

What a thrill -

My thumb instead of an onion.

The top quite gone

Except for a sort of a hinge

Of skin,

A flap like a hat,

Dead white.

Then that red plush.

Little pilgrim,

The Indian's axed your scalp.

Your turkey wattle

Carpet rolls

Straight from the heart.

I step on it,

Clutching my bottle

Of pink fizz.

A celebration, this is.

Out of a gap

A million soldiers run,

Redcoats, every one.

Whose side are they on?

0 my

Homunculus, I am ill.

I have taken a pill to kill

The thin

Papery feeling.

Saboteur,

Kamikaze man

The stain on your

Gauze Ku Klux Klan

Babushka

Darkens and tarnishes and when

The balled

Pulp of your heart

Confronts its small

Mill of silence

How you jump -

Trepanned veteran,

Dirty girl,

Thumb stump.

Poet Don Paterson reflects on Sylvia Plath's poem 'Cut'.

05 LASTRobert Frost's 'design'20170929Don Paterson is an award-winning poet, editor and teacher, but for all his technical ability and the recognition that has been paid to his work Paterson is acutely aware of awe and sometimes envy when he looks at the work of other writers. Here he applies his wit and skills of technical analysis to discussing five poems he wishes he had written.

Tonight, Robert Frost's poem 'Design'.

I found a dimpled spider, fat and white,

On a white heal-all, holding up a moth

Like a white piece of rigid satin cloth--

Assorted characters of death and blight

Mixed ready to begin the morning right,

Like the ingredients of a witches' broth--

A snow-drop spider, a flower like froth,

And dead wings carried like a paper kite.

What had that flower to do with being white,

The wayside blue and innocent heal-all?

What brought the kindred spider to that height,

Then steered the white moth thither in the night?

What but design of darkness to appall?--

If design govern in a thing so small.

Poet Don Paterson reflects on Robert Frost's 'Design'.